{"id":10524,"date":"2005-04-10T21:46:02","date_gmt":"2005-04-11T01:46:02","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.mercuryranch.org\/blog\/2005\/04\/10\/bears-at-twilight\/"},"modified":"2005-04-10T21:46:02","modified_gmt":"2005-04-11T01:46:02","slug":"bears-at-twilight","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/bears-at-twilight\/","title":{"rendered":"Bears at Twilight"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>As you can see, the bears made it back from their weekend foray.  <strong>Twilight <\/strong>is coming along nicely, but I&#8217;ve reached the point where I have &#8220;Too Much Information&#8221; all bunched together, and I&#8217;m still not sure how to rewrite so I &#8220;trickle&#8221; it to the reader.  I&#8217;m on page 132 of 335.  <\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve cut a considerable amount of deadwood from the manuscript, and moved a lot of scenes around for continuity purposes.  I have to wonder how the timeline gets so hosed.  I&#8217;ve made two overt situations less visible&#8211;they&#8217;re still there, but the details aren&#8217;t tossed into the reader&#8217;s face on a regular basis.  One is implied and the other is acknowledged but I&#8217;m removing details.  That the situations exist aren&#8217;t completely crucial to the story, but they add dimension to the characters.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>As you can see, the bears made it back from their weekend foray. Twilight is coming along nicely, but I&#8217;ve reached the point where I have &#8220;Too Much Information&#8221; all bunched together, and I&#8217;m still not sure how to rewrite so I &#8220;trickle&#8221; it to the reader. I&#8217;m on page <span class=\"excerpt-dots\">&hellip;<\/span> <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/bears-at-twilight\/\"><span class=\"more-msg\">Continue reading &rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[49,55],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-10524","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-twilight","category-web-stuff"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10524","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=10524"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10524\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=10524"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=10524"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=10524"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}