{"id":10580,"date":"2005-12-10T22:29:24","date_gmt":"2005-12-11T04:29:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.mercuryranch.org\/blog\/?p=297"},"modified":"2005-12-10T22:29:24","modified_gmt":"2005-12-11T04:29:24","slug":"reworking-chapter-1-for-tt","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/reworking-chapter-1-for-tt\/","title":{"rendered":"Reworking Chapter 1 for T&#038;T"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In addition to deleting what seemed like 5k (but was really only 3.5k) of my NaNo novel to kill the crap after the first scene, I&#8217;ve done a little restructuring to make it easier to follow.  <\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve subdivided chapters by year.  Instead of chapters, I think I&#8217;ll have parts.  Part I, Childhood.  Part II, College.  Part III, The Twenties.  Part IV, The Thirties.  If there&#8217;s anything after that, it&#8217;ll probably be Part V, Life or something like that.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve replaced 2.5k of that 3.5k with material more relevant to moving the story, and I believe it will be stronger because of it.  I can tell I&#8217;m going to have to get even more ruthless with words&#8211;they keep creeping in when they just don&#8217;t contribute must-have stuff to the story.  <\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ll probably need one more good pass on Part I, but after that, I think I&#8217;ll have it and can move on to Part II.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In addition to deleting what seemed like 5k (but was really only 3.5k) of my NaNo novel to kill the crap after the first scene, I&#8217;ve done a little restructuring to make it easier to follow. I&#8217;ve subdivided chapters by year. Instead of chapters, I think I&#8217;ll have parts. Part <span class=\"excerpt-dots\">&hellip;<\/span> <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/reworking-chapter-1-for-tt\/\"><span class=\"more-msg\">Continue reading &rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[53,4],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-10580","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-threads-ties","category-writing"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10580","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=10580"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10580\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=10580"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=10580"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=10580"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}