{"id":1594,"date":"2008-12-24T10:18:36","date_gmt":"2008-12-24T16:18:36","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.mercuryranch.org\/blog\/?p=1594"},"modified":"2016-02-11T22:59:43","modified_gmt":"2016-02-12T04:59:43","slug":"one-pass-revision-begun","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/one-pass-revision-begun\/","title":{"rendered":"One-Pass Revision Begun"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Yes, for real.\u00a0 I may have said this before, but now I&#8217;m beginning <em>Twilight<\/em>&#8216;s One-Pass Revision.\u00a0 I&#8217;m starting on the third scene now, which requires a rewrite from an entirely different character&#8217;s POV.\u00a0 The first two scenes have been marked up beyond belief, and they were both solid &#8212; so I thought.\u00a0 To get this right, it&#8217;s going to be a slow, methodical process, but I finally am ready to learn and apply Holly Lisle&#8217;s One-Pass Revision.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve resisted the process in the past, and I suspect it was because I wasn&#8217;t mature enough as a writer to grasp what was being taught.\u00a0\u00a0 Time and the How to Think Sideways course seem to have helped.\u00a0 Most of all, I&#8217;m looking forward to getting something ready to query.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Yes, for real.\u00a0 I may have said this before, but now I&#8217;m beginning Twilight&#8216;s One-Pass Revision.\u00a0 I&#8217;m starting on the third scene now, which requires a rewrite from an entirely different character&#8217;s POV.\u00a0 The first two scenes have been marked up beyond belief, and they were both solid &#8212; so <span class=\"excerpt-dots\">&hellip;<\/span> <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/one-pass-revision-begun\/\"><span class=\"more-msg\">Continue reading &rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[49],"tags":[147],"class_list":["post-1594","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-twilight","tag-htts"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1594","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1594"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1594\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1594"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1594"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1594"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}