{"id":1867,"date":"2009-08-30T16:33:23","date_gmt":"2009-08-30T21:33:23","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.mercuryranch.org\/blog\/?p=1867"},"modified":"2019-06-29T20:16:25","modified_gmt":"2019-06-30T01:16:25","slug":"more-outlining-work","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/more-outlining-work\/","title":{"rendered":"More Outlining Work"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>While in San Antonio, I fired up QuickPlot on the laptop (WinXP, so no Scrivener).\u00a0 After doing the story arc math from Jennifer Crusie&#8217;s RWA Handout posted over at Argh Ink and plugging it in, I began transferring my notes I&#8217;d printed from Scrivener before leaving Central Texas.\u00a0 The first thing I discovered, was that I&#8217;d started out all wrong (not saying I have to follow Jenny&#8217;s story arc, but it made sense for this story &#8212; a category romance).<\/p>\n<p>I think I figured out how to have critical action in the beginning of the story while still allowing time for the relationship between the characters to build.\u00a0 For me, this isn&#8217;t as easy as it sounds.<\/p>\n<p>This story has precipitating events that make the beginning challenging enough, so I think I have enough to build to the First Turning Point.\u00a0 I still don&#8217;t have a workable Sentence (a&#8217; la How to Think Sideways).\u00a0 I do believe I see a need to cover at least two story aspects in the outline &#8212; the story itself and the growing relationship between the two main characters.\u00a0 I think if I do that, I&#8217;ll keep the threads on track &#8212; or at least have an idea when I&#8217;ve wandered into off-road territory and need to lock in the hubs.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been reworking a few scenes today, and have reached the Second Turning Point.\u00a0 I&#8217;m not certain I&#8217;m satisfied with the progress to this point.\u00a0 There&#8217;s something that doesn&#8217;t feel quite right, and that usually means something <em>isn&#8217;t<\/em> quite right.\u00a0 But what might it be?\u00a0 I&#8217;ll have to figure it out.<\/p>\n<p>For those of you using Scrivener, I&#8217;ll share a couple of observations on technique.\u00a0 Feel free to add suggestions or comments.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve been working in the Corkboard screen for typing in the notecards, but it&#8217;s easier to read through the whole thing in the Outliner screen.\u00a0 Of course, entering data in the Outliner screen isn&#8217;t as easy as in the Corkboard screen &#8212; I can&#8217;t create paragraphs in that mode.\u00a0 Easy to do on the index card, though, so I think I&#8217;ll use the Outliner screen for reading through for continuity after I get the basics typed in.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>While in San Antonio, I fired up QuickPlot on the laptop (WinXP, so no Scrivener).\u00a0 After doing the story arc math from Jennifer Crusie&#8217;s RWA Handout posted over at Argh Ink and plugging it in, I began transferring my notes I&#8217;d printed from Scrivener before leaving Central Texas.\u00a0 The first <span class=\"excerpt-dots\">&hellip;<\/span> <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/more-outlining-work\/\"><span class=\"more-msg\">Continue reading &rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[59],"tags":[149],"class_list":["post-1867","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-nano2009","tag-scrivener"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1867","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1867"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1867\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":14776,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1867\/revisions\/14776"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1867"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1867"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jeanschara.com\/pmtoo\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1867"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}