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  1. Hehe, some technology is actually working for a change, and that’s a new challenge. Interesting idea.

    The second half of the dialogue could need some speech tags, I was about to lose track who spoke. Is this Scifi? I get a sense it’s not our time exactly.

  2. Okay, what’s going on here? I’m intrigued. Who are these people, and why are they training to prevent attacks? Interested readers want to know!

  3. You do very good techie. I like the dialogue, I like the air of urgency, and I’m intrigued by what it is these folks are up to. Nice.

  4. Thank you. No. It’s not sci fi, but it’s set around 2010, so it’s near future — technology needs to advance just a little, and I think that’s about the right window.