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  1. Not having read any other snippets for this, I’m still intriqued, mostly by Nikki’s mother. She seems unhinged. I do wonder what happens.

  2. I really enjoyed this – I like how simple everything is, because someone at her age would see everything upfront and plain. Very nice. Very well written.

  3. I agree, good characterization for a kid, showing her grief, her bewilderment. Great snippet! (I’m just reading, not posting a snippet today.)

  4. I’m not up on Nikki’s role in the story so I don’t know how this fits in. But standing alone it is great character development and scene pacing. I want to keep turning the pages. I want for just one single adult in her life to reach out to her, to empathize with her and i’m angry with the ones who didn’t.