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  1. What a change! I was not expecting this Diet-Coke-drinking-microwave-meal -eating guy to have a secret vault. I love the contrast! Also I really liked his team’s goal of bowling as badly as possible. 😀

  2. Harold has the same attention to detail as a good spy. I chuckled when he showed some self awareness of what he did by likening himself to Maxwell Smart.

  3. Great snippet, I love that their goal is to come in next to last. Last place would be too easy, but just enough to tick off the other teams. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

  4. Thank you. Harold is my idea of a hero — an ordinary guy who does extraordinary things.

  5. Actually, this book is finished — first draft. I have a very weak antagonist who needs to be given some 3-D capability in the rewrite. I need to do a major push to finish the first draft of T&T this weekend. Then I’ll be able to resume revision work on this.

    I’m glad you’re interested.