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  1. Nice story. Pete’s slang is a bit disjointed, alluding to the fact that you speak better English. You might want to look back and see if you agree. Other than that, nice piece.

    Best regards,
    Elizabeth

  2. Stopping by on the 7th day of the #Challenge. Your blog looks great. I appreciate the uncluttered approach where reading the post is the focus. Know you are going to make new blogging friends. If you have time or interest, I am writing about gardening and related topics this month. Stop by.

  3. I really enjoyed your writing. Your character certainly has voice. I loved the dialogue … I’ve heard many conversations like that here in Louisiana! I really could imagine just how your character looked based just on the voice alone. Wonderful job!

  4. I really love this character–and it may be the novel in me, but I’d be happy to read longer pieces about him. Nice work!

    • This is all I have for this character right now. He made an appearance just for A-Z.