I completed my first look at the first 163 pages of Threads & Ties yesterday. Erin from FM graciously looked at my childbirth scene and told me how wrong I had it (never done that, and the Internet is only good for so much). I’ll have some things to fix in that section (no surprise there). I think I got all the scenes into proper chronological order, so when I resume first draft writing, I’ll begin in Part IV, The Thirties. This brings us to Nikki’s settling down (no more sex toy scenes, thank God), Nicole (Cole) as a teenager, and Jeff, well, I’m not sure what’s up with Jeff. He and I need to talk.