Hey! I’m supposed to be cutting words! Ah well. I had a few minutes tonight, so I worked a few more pages in Twilight revisions.

I’m liking this better as I work on it. Maybe two or three more times through, and I’ll have it scrubbed and presentable. Yeah, now that I think back on it, I always liked revising better than first draft. Of course, I have to get something to revise, so it all works out in the end. And, certainly, revising is more fun if you get some decent stuff in your first draft to work with.